Saturday, May 5, 2012
Deeper shadow on the inside of the broken branch (?)
A bit deeper color on the small branches at the upper left (?)
A little darker on the left forward branch (?)
The thorn overlapping the left bird's tail shouldn't be overlapping as it is behind the tail.
I need to add a bit of green somewhere other than on the cactus and also somewhere in the civet part of the painting.